It Ends Tonight!!!!!!

Rebekah kenshole is an online journal writer on a site  called  "The Helium".The title of the first article is "Why most religion prohibit premarital sex".The whole article is exclusively based on religions point of view.Through this article the writer is trying to stress , that sex before marriage is strictly proscribed by most of the religions  as it is something that should n't be practice by nowadays people.From the title itself we can see that how important the writer concerns about premarital sex.On the other hand Taylor Bennett is the author of the second article.She is a freelance writer and a reporter based in Central Jersey.She have a B.A in Journalism from New Jersey City University and three years of professional experience in the field.This shows that the second author is much more experinced than the first author as Taylor have written more articles than Rebekah.


The title of the first article itself gives me a rough idea that the whole text is going to be about the negative impacts of premarital sex and that the author is totally going against premarital sex and this can be proven when she mention the line"Apart from a position of abstinence from premarital sex being a decree of god as the following reasons are generally included in the list of reasons for abstaining from premarital sex" while the second article gives me an impression that self-discipline is much better than premarital sex.From the title of these articles itself we can imagine what the articles is all about.Therefore both the authors have given an interesting titles to their masterpiece to attract the readers.Even though both the articles have interesting titles but i got to agree that the first article by Rebekah Kenshole with the title of "why most religion prohibits premarital sex" caught my attention more than the other article by Taylor Bennett.The first author strongly believes that premarital sex is something that should be hindered while the second author thinks that preventing the urges from having sex is better than premarital sex as it is more safer and healthier.


Rebekah says that people tend to have a great desire in sexual activites as they want to know how does it feels especially when they are a teenager.This should be encouraged,not through physical experimentation but in the sense of education like open discussion just like what is mention in the article.This would be more effective if the conversation is done with our parents as they are more matured.Taylor expresses her point of view saying that preventing sex is better having one before marriage because premarital sex affects a person life in many ways.She said that the feeling that you would get in the end is all just guilt as it will spoil the rest of your life.


After having read both the articles i realize that the content of the first article is not as interesting as the title as i mention earlier.The tone gives me a very tense feeling because while i read the text i feel so pressured with the usage of her vocabulary as i'm not too use to the tone that is used by Rebekah.On the other hand the article by Taylor is very much interesting because her point of view is much clearer and more precise.Her idea is more enhancing to the future generation plus it makes the reader to actually consider what she have written.


As a conclusion i would like to strongly say that the second article written by Taylor Bennett is more beneficial than the Rebekah's article as rebekah's is more to religion while Taylor is more to reality.Her point of views are very strong and she is able to prove every single of her statement with a relevent evidence.Therefore i think that the second article is more adequate to read as the author understands the feelings of the people around her compared to the first article.