Rebekah kenshole is an online journal writer on a site called "The Helium".The title of the first article is "Why most religion prohibit premarital sex".The whole article is exclusively based on religions point of view.Through this article the writer is trying to stress , that sex before marriage is strictly proscribed by most of the religions as it is something that should n't be practice by nowadays people.From the title itself we can see that how important the writer concerns about premarital sex.On the other hand Taylor Bennett is the author of the second article.She is a freelance writer and a reporter based in Central Jersey.She have a B.A in Journalism from New Jersey City University and three years of professional experience in the field.This shows that the second author is much more experinced than the first author as Taylor have written more articles than Rebekah.
The title of the first article itself gives me a rough idea that the whole text is going to be about the negative impacts of premarital sex and that the author is totally going against premarital sex and this can be proven when she mention the line"Apart from a position of abstinence from premarital sex being a decree of god as the following reasons are generally included in the list of reasons for abstaining from premarital sex" while the second article gives me an impression that self-discipline is much better than premarital sex.From the title of these articles itself we can imagine what the articles is all about.Therefore both the authors have given an interesting titles to their masterpiece to attract the readers.Even though both the articles have interesting titles but i got to agree that the first article by Rebekah Kenshole with the title of "why most religion prohibits premarital sex" caught my attention more than the other article by Taylor Bennett.The first author strongly believes that premarital sex is something that should be hindered while the second author thinks that preventing the urges from having sex is better than premarital sex as it is more safer and healthier.
Rebekah says that people tend to have a great desire in sexual activites as they want to know how does it feels especially when they are a teenager.This should be encouraged,not through physical experimentation but in the sense of education like open discussion just like what is mention in the article.This would be more effective if the conversation is done with our parents as they are more matured.Taylor expresses her point of view saying that preventing sex is better having one before marriage because premarital sex affects a person life in many ways.She said that the feeling that you would get in the end is all just guilt as it will spoil the rest of your life.
After having read both the articles i realize that the content of the first article is not as interesting as the title as i mention earlier.The tone gives me a very tense feeling because while i read the text i feel so pressured with the usage of her vocabulary as i'm not too use to the tone that is used by Rebekah.On the other hand the article by Taylor is very much interesting because her point of view is much clearer and more precise.Her idea is more enhancing to the future generation plus it makes the reader to actually consider what she have written.
As a conclusion i would like to strongly say that the second article written by Taylor Bennett is more beneficial than the Rebekah's article as rebekah's is more to religion while Taylor is more to reality.Her point of views are very strong and she is able to prove every single of her statement with a relevent evidence.Therefore i think that the second article is more adequate to read as the author understands the feelings of the people around her compared to the first article.
Tuesday, January 18, 2011
Thursday, January 6, 2011
Especially For Amelia Nicole Boudville....
Early and personal life
Vettel was born in Heppenheim, West Germany in July 1987. Vettel suggested in an interview that he was terrible at school; he also mentioned that his childhood heroes were "The three Michaels", who were Michael Schumacher, Michael Jackson and Michael Jordan. He stated that he wanted to be a singer like Michael Jackson but realised that he couldn't as he didn't have the voice.[3] He has one younger brother, Fabian and two older sisters Melanie and Stefanie. Vettel lives in Switzerland amongst other racing drivers and is a fan of German football team Eintracht Frankfurt. He is currently in a relationship with Hanna Prater, the two having known each other since school, but only beginning a relationship three years ago.[4]
Early life
Andy Murray was born to Willie and Judy in Glasgow, Scotland.[8][9] His maternal grandfather,Roy Erskine, was a professional footballer who played reserve team matches for Hibernian and in the Scottish Football League for Stirling Albion and Cowdenbeath.[10][11][12][13] Murray's brother, Jamie, is also a professional tennis player, playing on the doubles circuit.[14] Murray was born with a bipartite patella, where the kneecap remains as two separate bones instead of fusing together in early childhood.[15] He was diagnosed at the age of 16 and had to stop playing tennis for six months. Murray is seen frequently to hold his knee due to the pain caused by the condition, but manages it through a number of different approaches.[16] But Murray has been known to pull out of events because of the condition.[17]
Following the separation of his parents when he was aged nine, Murray and Jamie lived with their father.[18] Murray later attended Dunblane High School.[19][20]
hope u like it....
FREAKING tired BORED!!!
was a very busy day today......maths lecture followed by english lecture...chemitry tutorial continuusly and physics tutorial..gosh can anybody tell me what is goin on in aimst today..so many classes...now at library blogging while waiting for xchyi to write her blog...WELL gotta say she is taking a long time!!!!LAGI LA I TIRED..HHHHmmmmmm...!!!!!!after this im definitely sleepin like a pig...dont care!!hungry and sleepy and tired an ann ann annddd aaannnnndddd errrgghhh bored!!!!!
Friday, December 3, 2010
where are u???
praba where are u now....u've been the only guy friend i've ever trusted in my life....we know each other for a very long time bt now we are like 2 different people..WHY DOES THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN....i seriously hope that i can see once gain..just once is more than enough...pls just let me know where u are..i can't even find u in facebook bt i do believe that u have fb bt i just couldnt find..i search for u like everyday..i x know wat happened btw us.....pls i wanna meet u gain....fingers cross..
Sunday, October 31, 2010
ITS HARD TO TRUST PEOPLE...
i just find its so hard to trust anyone now...i find that friendship don't last long nowadays..first you will be so close to this person cause u think that this person is like u know...understands you well bt there comes a point where you find that that person is actually just using u...seek you during trouble times and when that person is alone and have no yone to talk to..BULLSHIT i'm tellin..it hurts u know seriously it does.....i trusted so much..helped you when yr down be there for you when u need someone but in return you gave me nothing than pain....its not like im askin you to treat me as how i've treated you but at least don't use me...do i look like a tissue paper that you use..use it and throw in the dustbin beside u..when yr with yr friends and im there you don't even give a shit bout me...you dont even know whether i exist when yr alone you expect me to be there wit u cause yr scared to be alone..trust me you always complain bout others bt now i do think that yr behaviour and the way you treat friends(so called friends)like shit...no wonder nobody treat you good.stop blaming others when the fault is all yours...try to sit down alone and think bout what have you done for others.........its a pain i'm tellin u..trust me if you keep on behavin like this someday when you fall down there won't be anyone wit you to help you to get up....you'll have to do it by own and i t don't think you are strong enough to do...so learn how to treat yr friends like friends for real...cause there is nobody better than yr friends...don't end up like a ........
Friday, October 29, 2010
HaTe ThEsE FEELING!!!!
I never really liked u...after getting to know u i think i really like u now...i wouldn't say yr handsome or cute or blah blah bt something about you makes me to go ooolalalla...there's something about you but till this moment i x know wat it is...eventhough i know there's nothing can happen between us but i still hope that you'll be my friend..not to say i have feelings for u bt i got this wish that i hope that i can see and talk to you almost everyday..it would be more than enough..i never ask for this to happen to me..i never had this kinda feeling towards anyone till now but now i do..yyyy????is it true feelings????i x know..but right now this moment i gave up on you because of someone..i think that u might like this person cause she is much much better than me...she is more feminine,sweeter won't use foul words wherby i use it like almost everyday..hahaha she suits you more than i do i guess..ahhh wat rubish am i talking..its okay it will take some time for me to get back to normal but i'll try my level best..perhaps i think i gotta crush on u..don't mistaken me after all i'm just a normal girl who has the same feelings as other girls at the age of 18..sorry......forgive me if i've changed yr impression about me..i may act or look like i x care bt deep down inside i do.....
18th OF LIVING.....
Hey dad and mom thanks for the very advance b'day gift..it was awesome..eventhough the bear is in pink bt i still love it..and yea thanks for the cool ferrero rocher chocolate..suprinsly u guys gave me that much of chocolate whereby normally amma won;t even let me to eat a single piece of sweet stuffs..btw my 18th gift is really nice..something i wanted for a very long time..FINALLY GOT IT..thanks guys...
Sunday, October 24, 2010
Saturday, October 2, 2010
SHINEE....
actually i'm not a fan of korean stuffs but just recently i found a korea boy band called shinee..really nice..i like them for their energetic dance moves in their video and also the lead singers voice..his name is ONEW...he's voice kinda cool and when he sing english songs he dont even have any korean accent....he sang the song i'm yours by jason mraz...not bad...quite nice...
Exception.....
I find both the song and the video cool...paramore's hayley william rock man..her voice damn awesome....
HAYLEY NICOLE WILLIAMS
He Is No More.......
Biography forBrandon Lee
Date of Birth
1 February 1965, Oakland, California, USADate of Death
31 March 1993, Wilmington, North Carolina, USA (accidental gunshot wound from faulty prop revolver)Birth Name
Brandon Bruce LeeHeight
6' (1.83 m)Mini Biography
He was born on February 1, 1965 to Bruce Lee (Martial Arts idol) and Linda Lee. Brother to Shannon Lee. In 1965 they moved to Hong Kong where Brandon became fluent in Cantonese by the age of 8. He attended Boston's Art-Oriented Emerson College in Massachusetts. He studied Martial Arts and drama, like his father. In 1983 he was expelled from school because of misbehavior, but received his diploma at Miraleste High school. He was in "Rapid Fire", "Showdown Little Tokyo", and a few more films, including "The Crow". He turned down offers to be in "Dragon: The Bruce Lee story". Bruce died (while filming) at the age of 32, of what is to be believed, a brain hemorrhage. Brandon died at the age of 28 on the set of "The Crow". The film crew shot a scene in which it was decided to use a gun without consent from the weapons coordinator, who had been sent home early that night. They handed Michael Massee the gun loaded with full power blanks and shot the scene, unaware a bullet head from an inert round had accidentally been lodged in the barrel. Even though the gun was pointed away from Lee, the force from the blank curved the flight of the bullet head and it shattered his spinal cord. The crew only noticed when Lee was slow getting up. The doctors worked desperately for five hours, but it was no use. After his spinal cord was shattered, he had no chance of survival. He was pronounced dead at 1:04 pm the next day. He was supposed to marry Eliza Hutton on April 17. His body was flown to Seattle to be buried beside his father in Lake View Cemetery.
Hold on.....i find this song is really nice..the lyrics are great..meaningful!!!
I've been there a thousand times,
I've felt the rain like a thousand knives.
And it hurts,
I know it hurts!
I've been there like a fighter plane,
Tryin' fly my way through a hurricane.
And it's hard,
I know it's hard!
Don't be afraid,
You'll make it through,
Just call out to me and I'll come running to you!
Hold on, hold on!
When the current pulls you under,
And your heart beats like thunder.
Just give me your hand,
And hold on, hold on!
Until the storm is over,
And I'll be fighting for you.
Just give me your hand and,
Hold on!
I'll give you hope, I'll give you faith!
And if it's dark, I'll light the way,
For you, for you!
By your side, until the end,
Until you're standing tall again!
I'm here, I'll always be here.
And if the tide, sweeps you out to sea,
When your strength is gone, and it's hard to believe!
Hold on, hold on!
When the current pulls you under,
And your heart beats like thunder!
Just give me your hand,
And hold on, hold on!
Until the storm is over.
And I'll be fighting for you,
Just give me your hand!
Ooooo so...
Hold on, hold on!
When the current pulls you under,
And your heart beats like thunder!
Just give me your hand.
And hold on, hold on!
Until the storm is over,
And I'll be fighting for you!
Just give me your hand,
And hold on, hold on!
Friday, October 1, 2010
Love those roses....
something bout roses that makes me something...attracted to flowers and can't stop loving them..i think they are the most beatiful thing i've seen im my life....
Collection Of Roses......
Red Rose stands for; Love, Passion, Respect
White Rose stands for; Love Brides Rose and Purity
Yeller Rose stands for; Joy, Friendship and Promise
Pink Rose stands for; Grace and Sweet Thoughts
Funny how giving the wrong colored rose might send the wrong message.
Roses are the ultimate flower for expression of emotion or feeling. As a gift, rosesroses can convey different meanings if the person receiving them knows the symbolism attached to the various colorscolors of rosesroses. Over the years, the meanings behind the different colorscolors of rosesroses have evolved to cover many sentiments. Red is the most commonly given color of rosesroses. Red signifies love and passion. True red is the rose for lovers. Fiery red rosesroses signify passion, while cardinal red symbolizes desire. Fully bloomed red rosesrosesbest convey the message “I still love you,” while red rose buds are a way to express love for the first time.
rosesroses once meant jealousy, but today the yellow rose signifies friendship, familiar love, and domestic happiness. Yellow roses can also be an appropriate sentiment to express sympathy.
White rosesroses are sometimes called the “flower of light” and are the bride’s rosesroses. They symbolize unity, sincerity, loyalty, purity, and a love stronger than death. White rosesroses can be mixed with red to emphasize the meaning of love, while white rose buds are an appropriate gift to a young girl from her father.
rosesroses represent majestic glory and can symbolize eternal love, while lavender or lilac rosesroses signify love at first sight or the beginning of true feelings. Purple rosesrosesare appropriate for wedding anniversaries beyond 25 years and as memorial flowers for a lost spouse. Deep purple rosesroses should be reserved for intimate situations. Black rosesroses are symbolic of death. Many people view black rosesroses as an omen, but they can signify change or rejuvenation on the horizon, as some rose buds appear black but then bloom into crimson red. The meaning of black rosesroses may not be understood or well received as a gift, so you should avoid this color if you are at all unsure of the recipient’s beliefs. Many colorscolors of rosesroses come in various shades, which can signify slightly different meanings from their primary colorscolors. Mixing different colors
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